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Characters
Tally - Girl
Mikita - Dragon
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Opening
- Tally is at a small table in a bazaar purchasing a small
onyx dragon. While purchasing the dragon, the person she
is buying it from is shot an another bullet hits the dragon
and shatters it, revealing a map inside. Tally grabs the map and runs.
Over the shoulder shot of
Tally
Tally : “Let me see it!”
cut
to
shot of the table : an onyx dragon is placed on the table
Cut
to OTS of
Tally : “I believe you said 1500 creds for it.”
Cut
to OTS of
Dealer : “No, 2500, I am sure”
Cut
to OTS of
Tally : “2000, take it or leave it!”
cut
to shot of the table
Tally places the money on the table
Cut
to OTS of
Dealer : “You are trying to rob me blind, how….”
Sound
of gunshots
cut
to three men shooting at camera
cut
to shot of the table
the
onyx dragon is blasted to pieces and the dealer falls limp
onto the table, Tally sees a piece of paper sticking out
of what remains of the dragon. She grabs the paper and the money.
Shot
of Tally running away.
Small
alley way - Tally viewing the map. On
the map is written “Passing through the Serpents Mouth will
take you to the Dragons Lair”
VO “There she is, she’s got
the map!”
Tally
turns in the direction of her accusers just as three large
men begin shooting and running after her.
She ducks down another alley and jumps into a nearby
window.
There
is a shot of tally ducking under a window as her pursuers
pass by
Library
Map Room - Tally is comparing her map to some maps of
surrounding areas. She is being watched and photographed as she
is doing it.
As a photograph is taken there
is a clicking sound and a sleight pause before continuing
there
will also be a cross hair overlay at this point
Map
Travel - An overlay of a plane flying over a copy of
a paper map, a red line on the map marks the way they are
going.
Runway
- As Tally lands at her destination and gets off of her
plane she finds that people are waiting for her and take
her into custody.
Escape
- In a brick room with a narrow window,
she kicks out the window and climbs out onto the ledge,
she looks down and sees a large pile of hay, she jumps and
lands right in the middle.
Stables
- she has landed right in the middle of the stables, grabs
a horse, and takes off bareback.
Mountain
side - Tally
on horseback, she looks at her map and the way to go. As she starts the horse on a run it is shot and they both go down,
she crawls back to her feet and starts running again.
Cave
entrance - The only escape Tally sees is a cave entrance
and she runs to it. Once she gets to a point inside of the cave
that she can no longer tell where the opening is she pulls
out a glow stick and continues on.
She comes to a dead end,
and as she looks at the wall she notices that there
are a couple of carvings on the wall. She runs her fingers down the carvings and
when they come to a stop there are buttons there, she presses
both at the same time, and the wall rises up.
Cave-in
/ Glow stick Escape - as she passes through the door
it slams shut behind her. Her glow stick goes out as a red light lights
up the room and a projector comes out of the ceiling, it
shows the some armor, a pedestal and a dragon.
As it shows the dragon the projector begins blinking
out and the room goes black.
She lights up another glow stick, looks around the
room. CRACK, the ceiling caves in, black, wait a couple
of seconds, then through Tally’s eyes a blue-white light
is seen, she crawls to it.
Armor
- Tally sees what looks like body armor floating in the
air in this cavern, she goes over to look at it and when
she places her hand on the jewel on the headpiece, the armor
comes to life. It
shoots in all directions and begins placing itself on her
body, as it goes on her body her own clothes dissolve.
Dead
End - She continues on after her transformation, The
way behind her blocked by the cave-in.
There is a stream that runs through here, she dives
in and begins to follow it.
Camera turns to view cave
in
Cut
to a down shot of water
Back
shot of Tally diving into the water
Dragon
- She comes up from the stream in a large cavern with a
waterfall rushing as a wall on one side, A giant dragon
statue in the middle, and a pedestal with a carving of a
hand on it. When
she places her hand on the pedestal, the dragon comes to
life.
They’re
back - As Tally and Mikita leave the cave through the
waterfall Tally notices that her pursuers are on top of
a nearby cliff and they begin firing at them.
Final
fight - Tally jumps off the back of the dragon and lands
fist first on top of a tank, collapsing it.
Mikita lands in the middle of three more tanks, opens
her tail and chops the first one from the top, shakes it
free from her tail, chops the second from the front, swings
her tail up and blasts the third.
End
- Mikita jumps into the air and camera pans up as Mikita
jumps up and stops with the sun in the upper left corner
after a sleight pause Mikita swoops down through the upper
right corner, Tally takes a running jump off of the cliff
cut to Tally landing on Mikita’s back, they fly off into
the sunset…. Fade to black.
